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Friday, July 26, 2019

The Magic Hoop

“Here, here pass me the ball i'm open”. It was 1999 when two college’s were battling for the

MCAA championship chrpe. There five second on the clock, Tracy Johnson was on three

point line. Tracy’s team was down by two. They gave Tracy the ball he shoots and he scores,

Tracy’s team wins the MCAA championship. It turns out Tracy went on to being one of the

greatest basketball players in the world. 


Thirty years later Tracy had a son. His name was Owen. Owen wanted to be just like his dad.

Owen was eleven, every morning he would wake up at five in the morning too go for a joge.

And every night Tracy would help Owen work on his shooting and his skills. 


Owen joined his school basketball team. Owen turned out to be the best player on his team,

because he worked hard and practiced with his dad. It came to school playoffs Owens team

made in, they were down by two, he was open on the three point line, you could hear Owen.

“pass to me i'm open”. Three Two One he shot the ball and hits the baser beater the crowd

goes wild. That game was on the court that his dad played on every one could the hoop. The

magic hoop.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Te Wano its Louis
    I really like your story.
    I like your starting sentence.
    Maybe you could tell us its your 15 minute writing next time

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