I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Kia Ora Te Wano, this is Shannon from the Summer Learning Journey.
You have done an outstanding job on creating these similes. I like that you converted them into a slideshow and I like your originality.
I love turtles. They’re one of my favourite animals. I always think of Squirt from ‘Finding Nemo’ when I think of them. He was so cute! Did you know that turtles hatch from eggs buried in the sand? They then have to crawl to the ocean right after they’re born. Isn’t that clever? Sometimes people even help guide the turtles to the ocean. They help by protecting them from predators. Do you know any interesting animal facts?
I would really appreciate it if you could add some images or colours to your post. This would enhance your similes and entice your readers.
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something done well Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia Ora Te Wano, this is Shannon from the Summer Learning Journey.
ReplyDeleteYou have done an outstanding job on creating these similes. I like that you converted them into a slideshow and I like your originality.
I love turtles. They’re one of my favourite animals. I always think of Squirt from ‘Finding Nemo’ when I think of them. He was so cute! Did you know that turtles hatch from eggs buried in the sand? They then have to crawl to the ocean right after they’re born. Isn’t that clever? Sometimes people even help guide the turtles to the ocean. They help by protecting them from predators. Do you know any interesting animal facts?
I would really appreciate it if you could add some images or colours to your post. This would enhance your similes and entice your readers.
Hei konā mai,
Shannon