I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Hi, Te Wano. This is awesome. I like that you took on board about the size of words for the ones that are most important to you. I can see straight away that your family and friends contribute in a positive way to your wellbeing. I am wondering if you could add to your post by writing a brief explanation of what you were asked to do, and also sharing the site you used to help make your word cloud.
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something done well Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi, Te Wano. This is awesome. I like that you took on board about the size of words for the ones that are most important to you. I can see straight away that your family and friends contribute in a positive way to your wellbeing. I am wondering if you could add to your post by writing a brief explanation of what you were asked to do, and also sharing the site you used to help make your word cloud.
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