One day there was a family a woman and her baby, the man, and he’s brother. “Quikly, come this way they won't find us here”. They were being chaste, by prison guards. Josh the brother, did something bad. He stole something from the prison. So there family has a target on their backs now. So one night the prison guards found them.
John the father, awoke. He said to his wife and brother. “Come on, wake up we need to go, they found us somehow”. But it was to late. The prison guards took josh and john, and killed his wife and his baby.
After three years of planning, they did it. Josh and john found a way out of their. When it was time for dinner, they had all their stuff that they needed, they were so ready. “ brother a you ready to do this” John said quietly. “I was born really John”. “Ok, do you remember the plan”. “Yep”. So they broke out, the guard’s did not no anything. Until the alarm went off. The guards were chasing them for ever. John and Josh, were running for their life’s. Luckily, they found a canoe, and they paddle away as fast as they can.
A few days later. The two men made it to a island, that no one knows about. So they made their own hut. Everyday one of them will go hunt enough food for the both of them. When the other brother is hunting, the other brother will be expanding their hut. “Brother i'm back i'm back”, said Josh. No one replied. Josh went looking around their hut, but no one was their. The End.
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