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Friday, May 24, 2019

Egg Thief

“I'm so hungry, there's nothing to eat” a little girl said.
Every day and night she will go and hunt for food. But she’s caught all of the animals.
But she does know were a big animal is, but it is too hard to kill.
So one day she decided to take the big animals baby. So she planned it all out.
And she went too the big animals home. The animal was a big, big, bird.
She needed too take the egg, and take it back too her home. Once she did that. She cracked open the egg. And started to eat the baby. But the bird found her. And the bird was so, so angry. What happened next......

2 comments:

  1. it was a good story I liked it was cool.
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  2. It was very interesting but my concern was when you said she was making a plan it be cool if you told us that plan and her puling it of but all and all it was a good story

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