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Friday, June 7, 2019

Above Eath

It was a nice dark night, when a little girl named Jamie went for a walk. Until a car struck past her, like the speed of lightning. It was a police chase.
A few meters down the road the car pulls over, the person inside the car was the best doctor, from the local medical centre, he’s name was Doctor John. Doctor John wind down the window, and asked Jamie if she wanted a ride. Jamie and the doctor knew each other very well.

But Jamie thought wrong. Jamie step in the doctors car. Doctor john locked the car, and locked the windows. Jamie asked, Doctor John why were you speeding? Surprisingly the Doctor told her the truth. “I was experimenting on animals, so i needed to leave”. The doctor took Jamie to his house. But Jamie asked him. “Doctor why am i here”. So when the doctor went to go get some supplies Jamie broke out. And she found one of the doctors creations, and she flu away. The End

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora. I am Sam from Gisborne Intermediate School.
    I really liked all your work you have put on your blog. I especially liked your writing called Above Earth.
    I learnt that you like rugby, basketball, fortnite and 4 square.
    Maybe you could fix up some spelling mistakes on your blog.
    Please visit my blog
    here

    Mā te wā
    Sam

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